Our inquiry in Hoiho is about space and how the moon orbits the Earth and the Earth orbits the sun. We know that it takes 365 days for the Earth to Orbit the Sun and that gives us seasons. We are learning about gravity too and gravity keeps us on Earth.
Hi there, my name is Leeya and I am a Year three in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the interesting words you used. It made me think about the red moon we saw last week. Have you thought about if you can add more detail to some of the sentences? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Beckett and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the similes. It made me think about the blood moon . Have you thought about making the sentences a bit longer ? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Beckett. Thank you for your comment. Next time we will think about adding more detail but for haikus we can't add more words because they have to fit the 5, 7, 5 syllable pattern. From Hoiho Class.
DeleteHi there, my name is Chantz and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the cool poems that you did It made me think about when i made a moon poem . Have you thought about making it more interesting with interesting words? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Quentin and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like space and I think it is interesting. It made me think about like i’m in space. Have you thought about making your own universe in space with you inside? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Eliza and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like that you added similes It made me think about blood moon. If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.1
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Isabella and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like that you added similes. It made me think about the blood moon . Have you thought about making the poems longer? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Stellan and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like that you added pictures. It made me think about the moon poems we wrote . Have you thought about putting in rhyming words? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Ryan and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the interesting words you used. It made me think about when I was a junior . Have you thought about the moon poem? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Tyler and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the writing and it is cool. It made me think about the moon . Have you thought about you can like explain more?If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is https://wpstylerz.blogspot.com/http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Jp and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the similes that you put in there. It made me think about cheese because of the cheese moon. Have you thought about making the pics out of pixil ? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.https://wpsjpf.blogspot.com/k\
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is micah and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like your pictures. It made me think about space . Have you thought about adding a bit more? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Romeo and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like blood moon It made me think about a rocket going to the moon. Have you thought about putting like the blood moon in? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Reyansh and I am a Year 4 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like your blog. It made me think about the red moon . Have you thought about if you can like explain more? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is https://teanaako.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Ryder and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like similes. It made me think about the moon poems that we have written in class too. Have you thought about making a video? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Saber and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like similes. It made me think about blood moon . Have you thought about blood moon ? If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Sarah and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like that you did the space pictures. It made me think about you should do maybe a rocket picture . Have you thought about doing more space images. If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://teanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Bostyn and I am a Year 3 in Te Ana Ako at Waikowhai School. I really like the interesting words you wrote. It made me think about the red moon we saw . Have you thought about putting some more pictures with the first poems. If you would like to see my learning, my class blog is http://wpsteanaako.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, thank you for sharing your poetry. You did a really good job, we like that you used a similie in your poem. We also like the pictures that you searched and added.
ReplyDeleteFrom Hoiho Year 3s :)